Video Feedback - Half Way

We have shown our video so far to members of our class and they have given us some feedback to improve our video. They noticed a continuity error whilst the young boy is at the sink, this however we cannot change but it can be missed as the shot is very quick. We also discussed with our audience about using the chroma key which would make it all black and white instead of the mask but us as a group cannot decide without it looks best to do it with or without. We will experiment with the effects for certain shots and definitely use ones such as the earthquake tool to give good effects when for example he drops the mask and screams in the microphone.

Apart from that however it was all good feedback and they thought that no changes should be made to the narrative storyline as it completely made sense.